The horror of a dead star demon

Hm... A star hm, yep a star, that's what i say. Me, Misty and Dawn have a adventure about a star.
Oh yea, i forget to introduce myself, I am Vemily, and I am 12 this year. That all i wanna say about myself.
Now for the adventure, you all wanna heard about the story right? If yes, then continue reading; If no, you can still continue watching.
So the story begins......
"Dawn! Vemily! Look that star is so Big, not just big, it's huge!"Misty say.
Me, Dawn and Misty are observing the star in a field. And it's real, that star is huge, Bigger than all of the star, it's like it's gonna fall down in any minute. No it's gonna fall down in any SECONDS!
"It look like it's gonna fall down in any seconds."Just as i said this, something fell down from the sky and lend on my hand.
"Oh My Gosh! Vemily, Where is that thing fell from the sky and where did it come form?"Dawn ask in a shocked.
"I don't know, It just fell down from the sky."I said.
"Vemily, Let's see what is it." Misty said.
I took it up from my right hand, the thing look like a bottle with a paper. The bottle is a opaque purple glass, there is a red ribbon tied from the bottle to the paper. I carefully untied the ribbon and took the paper, i open it up and read it loud:"If you wanna see the real star demon, drink this with your friend and the rainbow star will lead you to a cave to see the star demon.
left
left
right
left
right
right
left"
Misty asked:"What's that? And what's the left and right thing?"
"I don't know! Don't keep asking me!"I got angry and said.
Yea i get angry even when a little thing happen. But i can't control them so and... em... no so.
"We should drink this! Vemily, Misty don't we always wanted an adventure? Maybe it will be fun."
"But we won't know if it's real or not! Vemily, say something!"
"Yea but Maybe it will be fun."
....................
Five Minutes later
After a long chat, we decided to drink this. But before that, i went home to take my explorer bag, it have torch light, battries, camera, notebook, pen and a magnifier glass. I bring this every where.
Then 1 get 3 cup, I pour 2 cm of that drink for everyone, the rest i keep it. The drink is green in colour but glow blue light, when i drink it, i say:"Gross! It smell like some rapesberry and human blood!"
Just when i finish talking, we suddenly appeare in a forest. I saw a rainbow star infront of us, when i was about to touch it, it flew away, then i remember the messange, i told misty and dawn to follow the star. The star realy lead us to a cave, but when it reach there, the star disappeare.
"Let's go in."I say.
Misty, Dawn and I nodded. I took out my torch light and give them both one and when into the cave, but when we reach a distance, there was two part.
"Which way should we go?"Ask misty.
"I remember the letter have some left right thing, maybe thats the part."Say dawn.
"Yup I agree."I said.
I took out the letter and say:"
left
left
right
left
right
right
left
Then we should go left."
When we go left, something happen........

we saw a cave , a really bright cave and we gone inside , its was really little cave, and misty said the hell theres no passage to go through anymore, then we heard footsteps , really big ones, and a laughter, and its kinda saying, im gonna eat tonight mwahahahahah, we got terrified and tried to hide cause we cant escape its getting near, and then he reached our place and said dont bother hiding childrens im gonna find you, then dawn suddenly screamed and revealed our hiding place, the demon suddenly tried to get dawn , and misty said how about if we get the heck out of here, and i said no im not gonna let dawn be eaten by this freaking demon, and misty said i know your gonna say that , and he's putting dawn in his mouth and misty said dawn use your torch then the demons mouth was in fire then he throwed dawn out of his mouth and then me and vemily threwed our torched in his face, and said ahgh if i get the heck my face out of here ill eat u 2 first and i said lets get the heck out of this nightmare................ we ranned and ranned and misty said to me if i still got a match cause she wants to burn the cave and i said yes i still have, i gave it to her, and then he throws all the wood and paper and burned the cave, then she said i dont know if he will burn but lets get out of here we escaped and then dawn said vemily , your such a troublemaker hahahah you always put us in great danger, and misty said atleast we have fun :D then we all laughted .................the end